spring pond
a raindrop passes through
its own reflection


—Laryalee Fraser

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

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  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-03-21 00:57:07
     

    Lovely Lary!
    Hats off to you!

    warmly,
    kala

  2.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-03-21 03:24:16
     

    Nice! Very classic ku...

  3.  
    Magyar
    2007-03-21 04:52:35
     

    Lary,
    _To me, you've shown a paradigm of continuum... very nicely done!

    watching drops
    falling into themselves
    again
    _M

  4.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-03-21 08:04:24
     

    i enjoyed to read your haiku, Lary!

  5.  
    elena
    2007-03-21 09:03:51
     

    Very interesting

  6.  
    Helga Härle
    2007-03-21 16:21:52
     

    Illuminating!

    Thank you, Laryalee

  7.  
    David Fox (davidirafox at yahoo dot com)
    2007-03-21 17:49:54
     

    Laryalee,
    This haiku was simply beautiful! Good write!
    ~David Fox

  8.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-03-21 19:09:31
     

    Ah, Lary, you make it look so easy.

  9.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-03-22 07:12:16
     

    Nice one Lary!

    the geraniums
    flowering again
    just before the rain

    Potpourri Publications  U.S.A.   April 1994

  10.  
    Rita Odeh
    2007-03-22 09:24:23
     

    Lary, you managed to put into words the LIGHT in which you saw that raindrop before it vanished from your mind..!
    Fresh,insightful and flowing haiku.Enjoyed.

  11.  
    laryalee
    2007-03-22 15:13:37
     

    Thanks, Kala!

    Hi Andrea, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

    Magyar, you've caught the moment!

    Hi Angelika...thanks!

    Thank you, elena!

    David, it's nice to meet you...thanks very much!

    Bill, it's so good to see you...
    it's not always easy, lol!

    Alan, I see petals speckled by rain...nice!

    Rita, what a lovely comment...I enjoy
    the rain...but I wish it would warm up!

    ;-)
    Lary

  12.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-03-23 14:42:26
     

    predawn puddle-
    even before the rain
    the aches
    the pain

  13.  
    jem
    2007-03-28 03:25:02
     

    This is one of those haiku that makes me stop and go WOW. I get lost in the words and the image.

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