sun at last . . .
the snow recedes
in daffodils

—Ann K. Schwader

About the author: Ann K. Schwader, schwader at earthlink.net, lives & writes & gardens in Westminster, CO. More about her work (including haiku!) can be found at www.geocities.com/HPL4ever/.

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Responses to the haiku for 27 March 2007 by Ann K. Schwader

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-03-27 02:09:39
     

    a crocus bud
    in the warmth of a hand
    opens up

  2.  
    Gosia Zamorska
    2007-03-27 04:10:24
     

    Beautiful haiku:)

  3.  
    Ariel
    2007-03-27 06:03:26
     

    Love this!

    One for you in return:

    picture the present
    wrapped in white ~ fresh spring bouquets
    hidden underneath

  4.  
    Dana-Maria Onica
    2007-03-27 10:17:12
     

    I like so much the way you caught the transience, the change. Very elegant use of the kigo!
    I love your poem.
    Thank you for sharing.

    Dana-Maria

  5.  
    Magyar
    2007-03-27 10:58:25
     

    _Nicely done, Ann!
    To agree with Dana-Maria; seasons have no doors... only long hallways.

    snow mounds
    melting into softer nights
    peepers
    _M

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-03-27 16:54:57
     

    spring dawn
    tropical sky blue
    bougainvillaeas--
    deeper red

  7.  
    laryalee
    2007-03-31 20:22:46
     

    I love the movement, warmth
    and color in this!

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