bright spring day --
a cigarette break 
for the dustman

—Angelika Wienert
        

About the author: Angelika Wienert, born 1956 in North Rhine Westfalia (Germany) where I still live. I try to write haiku since 2002.

Contact: wienertnorbert at aol dot com

 

Responses to the haiku for 4 April 2007 by Angelika Wienert

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-04-04 00:32:49
     

    Dear Angelika,

    You've given this day to day happening a very sensitive touch!
    Great work.

    Kala

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-04-04 07:20:51
     

    Thank you for your comment, Kala! You just made my day!

    best wishes,
    Angelika

  3.  
    elena
    2007-04-04 09:21:22
     

    Bright spring day, dust, cigarette smoke, addiction... Interesting.

  4.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-04-04 10:08:51
     

    ...to face life with serenity...
    lovely haiku!

  5.  
    laryalee
    2007-04-04 10:19:44
     

    A glimpse of real life...
    good work, Angelika!
    :-)
    Lary

  6.  
    Susan Constable
    2007-04-04 13:33:30
     

    Lovely use of sounds and rhythm to compliment the image, Anglelika. Very nice!

    Susan

  7.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-04-04 14:54:50
     

    i appreciate all your comments!
    thank you very much!

    here it`s nearly midnight

    good night,
    Angelika

  8.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-04-06 05:15:04
     

    I love a good urban haiku, it surely adds to the melting pot that haiku is. ;-)

    warm day ...
    the workman lunches
    in his wheelbarrow

    Snapshot Calendar 2005

  9.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-04-08 00:54:15
     

    cool spring night--
    'gainst the curb
    rumbling trash cans

  10.  
    Rita Odeh
    2007-04-08 12:00:57
     

    Lovely haiku,Angelika.

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