park bench...
her hand resting on his
     white cane

—Brett Brady
        

About the author: Brett Brady: bcb at flex dot com

 

Responses to the haiku for 18 April 2007 by Brett Brady

  1.  
    Gosia Zamorska
    2007-04-18 00:19:32
     

    They are really together, calmly, slowly, till the end.
    Beautiful.

  2.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-04-18 04:17:49
     

    and i`m sure she tells him about the colours...

    a good haiku!

  3.  
    B. Tracker
    2007-04-18 08:56:35
     

    A simple, gentle picture of lasting love.

  4.  
    laryalee
    2007-04-18 11:40:11
     

    This is so moving...
    a memorable moment!

  5.  
    Nancy Nitrio
    2007-04-18 11:49:38
     

    Together, always.

  6.  
    brett brady
    2007-04-19 04:12:34
     

    kind words all - i appreciate them -
    thank you
    -brett

  7.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-04-20 22:02:54
     

    sunny solitude--
    pigeons flock
    to tattered homeless man handout

    -

    while passing along a much travelled stretch of road, i eyed this scenario beneath an underpass. turning around, i stopped to speak for a moment. he offered me this explanation, "the pigeon couldn't fend for themselves, as well as he could"...

  8.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan (aum_raudrabrahmanarayanan at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-29 10:47:59
     

    Very touching and vastly significant! The signs are perfectly laid here!

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