lake reflection. . . .
the hint of cherry blossom
with my wine

—Don Miller
        

About the author: I have been living, working, writing and raising a family in the Chihuahuan Desert of Southern New Mexico for about 20 years now. In addition to this poem, I have writings in and/or forthcoming in The Raintown Review, The Heron's Nest, Simply Haiku and RIBBONS.

Responses to the haiku for 30 April 2007 by Don Miller

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-04-30 07:51:43
     

    Intoxicating.

  2.  
    Vangella La Fount
    2007-04-30 08:11:57
     

    still pond
    holds the moon
    shine

  3.  
    Gosia Zamorska
    2007-04-30 08:32:57
     

    Relaxing:)

  4.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-04-30 09:55:43
     

    Nice and relaxing ku...

  5.  
    Josh Wikoff
    2007-04-30 10:31:35
     

    very nice don!

    autumn reflection...
    a hint of bitterness
    in my whine

  6.  
    Magyar
    2007-04-30 17:07:32
     

    _Don,
    So well written! The scent of cherry blossoms in the air. Nifty!

    sunset...
    wine of a closing day
    the last sip
    _M

  7.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-04-30 21:24:11
     

    Hi Don,

    With a mild suggestion how well you've brought out the imagery!
    Enjoyed!

    warmly,
    kala

  8.  
    laryalee
    2007-04-30 21:48:44
     

    This is delightful!
    How well the "hint" of scent/taste
    blends together...then on top of
    that, a lakeside scene...ahhhh!

  9.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-05-09 04:36:45
     

    sun golden mangoes
    6 am miami...
    4 pm mumbai

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