resetting the mousetrap,
after she goes out to play 


—Anthony Slauson
        

About the author: In my dreams I live in a place called Jewels-Run, Kentucky. I consider haiku to be an essential part of my spiritual diet.

 

Responses to the haiku for 4 May 2007 by Anthony Slauson

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-05-04 08:35:33
     

    We're going to try to use the humane trap again, but she's tricky and cheeky!

    Nice haiku, an interesting variation on the usual 3 line format.

  2.  
    Magyar
    2007-05-06 13:56:17
     

    _Anthony, your words spark imagination.

    Snap!
    _The bail hammered down as she secretly tripped the trap with a twig; the mouse won the cheese.

    tnx_M

  3.  
    gK
    2007-05-09 05:15:38
     

    Wonderful haiku and effective formating.

    crawling over arm hairs
    the gray-striped spider
    I try to take outside

    gK 2007

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-05-11 16:58:18
     

    milker, falling from a teet, this kitten

  5.  
    2007-05-29 22:33:58
     

    Great Haiku. Congratulations on being featured on tinywords.

  6.  
    Sharon Weimer (sharw007 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-05-30 05:35:41
     

    Nice work Anthony. Clever mouse, clever you.

  7.  
    Rhoda Galgiani (chesakat at verizon dot net)
    2007-06-08 06:54:37
     

    Clever mouse, planned the excape. Congratulations on being posted. Rhoda

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