wind chimes 
a leaf and a butterfly
rise together

—Laryalee Fraser

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

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Responses to the haiku for 15 May 2007 by Laryalee Fraser

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-05-15 01:56:55
     

    Vivid and telling!
    You've done it again Lary!
    Good one!

    -kala

  2.  
    Magyar
    2007-05-15 05:05:51
     

    Lary,
    _Such a little breeze, so grand its impact... and we are there. Remarkable_!
    _M

  3.  
    elena
    2007-05-15 08:21:39
     

    Almost as sexy as the haiku about the thigh.
    I enjoyed it.

  4.  
    il.balan
    2007-05-15 11:20:03
     

    wow!
    I read it again and keep silence...

  5.  
    Nancy Nitrio
    2007-05-15 11:47:50
     

    I can hear the soft sounds of the wind chime!

    Beautiful!

  6.  
    Carol Raisfeld
    2007-05-15 19:06:38
     

    A sensual ballet, Lary
    Beautiful!

  7.  
    lemonkind
    2007-05-16 06:33:13
     

    lovely...

  8.  
    laryalee
    2007-05-16 21:19:44
     

    Thanks to all of you for such
    wonderful comments...
    I appreciate each one!
    :-)
    Lary

  9.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-05-16 21:58:45
     

    misting sunrise--
    fallen acorn
    as grey squirrel free falls

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