morning rush...
  the warbler leaves us
a fragment of its song

—Ed Markowski
        

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 June 2007 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Bev Sills
    2007-06-01 05:44:14
     

    song fragments
    floating
    airy melody

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-06-01 06:20:03
     

    Enjoyed the fragment, thank you!

  3.  
    David Green
    2007-06-01 15:03:28
     

    Thank you Ed! This came as I read yours...

    music
    the silence
    between the notes

  4.  
    2007-06-01 16:12:23
     

    your words
    my morning
    a rush of feeling

  5.  
    laryalee
    2007-06-01 20:33:48
     

    Ooooh, this brought a tingle...
    excellent!

  6.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-06-03 04:43:18
     

    Yeah! I like your haiku!

  7.  
    Magyar
    2007-06-03 15:57:58
     

    Ed,
    Wow... that which Nature gives us... you have so very well presented. tnx _M

    morning bird's song
    as coins in your mind's purse
    ... a richer day

  8.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-06-04 04:37:06
     

    drowsy night surrenders
    just before dawn--
    the mockingbird song

  9.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-06-04 15:15:46
     

    I'm reminded of Keats's "kiss the moment as it flies."

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