next table
at the coffee shop...
free advice

—Sari Grandstaff
        

About the author: Sari lives in the Catskill Mountains with her husband and their three children. She likes to jump in rain puddles and do invisible ink puzzle books.

 

Responses to the haiku for 6 June 2007 by Sari Grandstaff

  1.  
    Alexandra Bottomfluff
    2007-06-06 05:29:06
     

    Sari,
    This is superb...

  2.  
    Bill Kenney (wpkenney at sprynet dot com)
    2007-06-06 07:33:51
     

    sidewalk cafe . . .
    as soon as he's left
    she picks up her phone

    Very nice, Sari. At the cafe, everybody's business is ours.

  3.  
    David Green
    2007-06-06 09:20:42
     

    Thank you Sari, many visual images and smells come out of your words.

  4.  
    Laura Orabone
    2007-06-06 10:54:24
     

    This is marvelous! Funny and true, yet a hint of warning, too.

  5.  
    laryalee
    2007-06-07 15:53:08
     

    I enjoyed this...I'm sure it brought
    a knowing smile to many faces!

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-06-07 20:16:16
     

    next table--
    my eyeing her entrée
    she eying mine

  7.  
    sharon
    2007-06-08 06:26:06
     

    Ha ha! How often does that happen??? Excellent write.

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