summer downpour
ducks take a swim
on my pool cover

—sharon weimer
        

About the author: Married for 26 years with two beautiful children. Dreaming of buying a farm and enjoying the open air. Poetry and photography are my most passionate hobbies.

Contact: sharw007 at yahoo dot com

 

Responses to the haiku for 7 June 2007 by sharon weimer

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    Dana-Maria Onica
    2007-06-07 21:03:06
     

    I admire your poem, Sharon. It has a kigo, according to the summer Japanese kiyose, and a good prosody. Ducks on the pool cover: funny idea!
    Thank you.

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-06-08 02:12:22
     

    Ducks just love water! ;-)

    Thanks for your haiku, it brought a smile.

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    Sari
    2007-06-08 05:25:34
     

    I like this a lot - Reminds me of the ducks landing in Tony's pool in The Sopranos

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    Rhoda Galgiani (chesakat at verizon dot net)
    2007-06-08 06:50:57
     

    So happy to see you posted here on tinywords for all to read. Light and airy, makes me smile. =0) oxoxox

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    Bill Kenney
    2007-06-08 08:02:50
     

    Full of joy.

  6.  
    judith Ingram
    2007-06-08 13:56:20
     

    Charming and humorous. I liked it very much. Great visual image! judith

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    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-06-08 19:56:16
     

    sharon, there are numerous ducks surrounding my home; comparable to any lover of the rain, they're prone to frolicking after any downpour

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    morning downpour...
    in the distance
    beatles "night before"

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