posing - 
a single drop of sweat
down my spine

—Robert Naczas
        

About the author: Robert Naczas (na_czas at poczta.onet.pl) was born and presently lives in South-East Poland. He published the collection "Breathless" in 1999 and his poems were featured in The Anthology of Polish Haiku (NOZOMI 2001).

 

Responses to the haiku for 11 June 2007 by Robert Naczas

  1.  
    Gosia Zamorska
    2007-06-11 01:27:46
     

    Hej:) Świetne, oryginalne haiku, zapadło mi w pamięć. Miło znów Cię widzieć w Tinywords.

  2.  
    Elena
    2007-06-11 10:41:34
     

    That gave me a shiver. Very effective.

  3.  
    Felica Sah
    2007-06-11 16:39:29
     

    Perfect. It is quite memorable and instantly triggers a colorful image in my mind. And it is a haiku that is unlike any that I have read before. Quite nice!
    -Felica

  4.  
    william rellford
    2007-06-11 18:57:29
     

    something oddly eerie about this too.
    very evocative and original.

  5.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-06-11 23:25:29
     

    Good one!
    _kala

  6.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-06-12 03:44:19
     

    That first line "posing" certainly does add a tension! ;-)

  7.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-06-18 04:25:45
     

    faint exposure--
    focusing my eyes
    towards the milky way

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