summer springs --
i try to scoop water   
with a straw hat


—Gautam Nadkarni
        

About the author: Gautam Nadkarni: g_nadkarni2003 at yahoo dot co dot in

 

Responses to the haiku for 13 June 2007 by Gautam Nadkarni

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-06-13 00:19:39
     

    Hi Gautam,

    Let me be the first to congratulate you on your beautiful haiku!

    Great imagery!

    _kala

  2.  
    Sylvian Waters
    2007-06-13 05:12:43
     

    Beautifully captures a timeless summer moment!

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-06-13 06:55:13
     

    A summer moment, but also a moment for all seasons. An amazingly rich haiku.

  4.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-06-13 10:03:22
     

    I really like the many layers that appear with more readings.

  5.  
    laryalee
    2007-06-14 22:44:15
     

    This is delightful!
    But it is also poignant...

  6.  
    Hannah Quinn
    2007-06-14 22:53:29
     

    I just love haiku for its brevity; and good haiku for its depth. You've achieved both here. Thanks for an experience.
    Hannah

  7.  
    Gautam Nadkarni
    2007-06-15 07:28:16
     

    My heartfelt thanks to all of you who responded. Indeed, I am honoured.

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