front porch dusk
he whittles
the silence

—Darrell Lindsey
        

About the author: Darrell Lindsey: writerd at hotmail dot com

 

Responses to the haiku for 26 June 2007 by Darrell Lindsey

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-06-26 06:19:00
     

    Too "poetic" for haiku? No. You have found the poetry in the moment and articulated it in the best words in the best order. Aren't all of us who try to write poetry, especially haiku, whittling the silence? Beautiful.

  2.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-06-27 06:11:01
     

    brittle opaque shell
    left behind--
    cicadas dirge

  3.  
    Georgia
    2007-06-30 14:29:18
     

    Very lovely, with more nuance than readers seem to have noticed. Thanks

  4.  
    cadie st. romain (cadiestromain at suddenlink dot net)
    2007-07-17 13:35:37
     

    great Haiku as always... well done.

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