shimmering grass
the silhouette of an egret 




—Martin Gottlieb Cohen

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

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Responses to the haiku for 3 July 2007 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-07-03 06:23:14
     

    Interesting juxtaposition. I certainly like re-reading the haiku each visit.

  2.  
    DarkMr
    2007-07-03 07:20:29
     

    Extraordinary; Alan, I too like re-reading haiku.

  3.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-07-03 10:24:51
     

    Excellent! ;-)

  4.  
    laryalee
    2007-07-06 13:57:19
     

    Very nice, Martin!
    (I think it would work well
    as a three-liner, too...giving
    a pause after "silhouette"?)
    ;)
    Lary

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-07-14 03:02:02
     

    statuesque egret
    refusing to blink--
    statuesque frog

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