beyond
the electric fan
crickets

—Ann K. Schwader
        

About the author: Ann K. Schwader, schwader at earthlink.net, lives & writes & gardens in Westminster, CO. More about her work (including haiku!) can be found at www.geocities.com/HPL4ever/.

 

Responses to the haiku for 10 July 2007 by Ann K. Schwader

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-07-10 07:30:11
     

    A good modern take on cricket haiku.
    Long live crickets! ;-)

  2.  
    Mike
    2007-07-10 10:59:02
     

    I like the auditory image...the depth of localization...very concise.

  3.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-07-10 12:26:44
     

    Coincise and effective ku: I like it...

  4.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-07-10 12:33:07
     

    technology and nature!

    i like your haiku!

  5.  
    gK
    2007-07-10 22:31:18
     

    Simple and effective.

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-07-14 18:12:21
     

    ann, while reading your ku, i began thinking of the innumerable nights i'd fallen asleep with the sound of crickets in the background; only to awaken with the silence, my silent alarm system.

    -

    crisp night air
    through an open window...
    cricket's chirps go missing

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