his brother's new bike--
looking down
at his tricycle

—Tim Jamieson

About the author: I am Canadian, born and raised in the province of Saskatchewan and living in Winnipeg, Manitoba. I first began writing haiku in 1983, and have had work accepted in Canada, the U.S., Japan, Australia, New Zealand, England, Ireland and Belgium.

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  1.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-07-12 08:54:34
     

    that`s life...

    and one day this tricycle driver will be owner of a wonderful bike and...


    a good senryû!

  2.  
    laryalee
    2007-07-13 11:43:55
     

    A neat "brotherly" moment!

  3.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-07-19 18:53:39
     

    tim, a wave of (christmas past) rushed over me. being familiar with the "older brother's new bike"; prior to my being capable of riding a bike, i longingly admired the shiny red bike my older brother had received for christmas; equally well, with the cap pistols i received, i remember my tears...

    yet, more memorable were the tears i shed when my brother died

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