three-month drought --
the clouds fading 
on the street mural


—Elena Naskova
        

About the author: I was born and raised in Macedonia. I now live in Seattle and I love the trees and the rain. I write mostly haiku and plays.

Contact: samoil99 at earthlink dot net

 

Responses to the haiku for 13 July 2007 by Elena Naskova

  1.  
    Alan Summers
    2006-10-28 11:03:58
     

    Just shies short of too much telling. I really like it.

  2.  
    Magyar
    2007-07-13 07:14:58
     

    Elena, I admire your thought, so well seen and written!

    sun bleached...
    art of the street
    washed away
    _M

  3.  
    laryalee
    2007-07-13 11:42:45
     

    I really like the connections here!

  4.  
    Marijo
    2007-07-13 19:29:21
     

    Good haiku!

  5.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-07-15 10:18:00
     

    I really enjoy coming back to this haiku!

    It is one of those rare instances where the 'ing' works as it should.

    This is one of those haiku that should go into whatever is the next major global haiku anthology.

    You need haiku that can be read and read, and then read again, and have more than just "surface depth".

    Thank you Elena.

  6.  
    Elena
    2007-07-15 19:09:27
     

    Thank you guys for your kind comments.
    e

  7.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-07-23 19:30:05
     

    summer storm
    far into the night--
    two hearts beating as one

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