a parking lot
a maple stump blooms
in the far corner

—George Carvalho
        

 

Responses to the haiku for 25 July 2007 by George Carvalho

  1.  
    Magyar
    2007-07-25 05:29:22
     

    George, a very fine reminder that all things have purpose; life surges on. Tnx, _M

    green sprigs
    surge above the lost
    birds wait

  2.  
    Megan (markenberg at yahoo dot com)
    2007-07-25 13:40:36
     

    Lovely image, George! I can almost feel the maple sap and smell the new green leaves.

    Though why the double article? Might simply "parking lot" be a better first line?

    ~Megan

    maple sap
    this novel's pages
    smell alive

  3.  
    David Wood (wood1438 at sbcglobal dot net)
    2007-07-27 10:34:57
     

    parking lot
    weeds between the cracks
    yesterday

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-02 21:23:45
     

    fading kudzu
    along least travelled path
    extends far in the distance

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