veiled moon - 
the clouds monopolize 
all your light

—Jordi Climent
        

This is the original Spanish version:

luna velada -
acaparan las nubes
toda tu luz

About the author: Jordi Climent, jclimentb at gmail dot com

 

Responses to the haiku for 1 August 2007 by Jordi Climent

  1.  
    Felica Sah
    2007-08-01 11:03:57
     

    Unexpected, spontaneous, lyrical, beautiful. A wonderful haiku.

  2.  
    il.balan
    2007-08-01 11:46:11
     

    Nice to see you here, Jordi

  3.  
    Sue Burke
    2007-08-01 12:02:23
     

    Simple words that convey a complex emotion. Excepcional.

  4.  
    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) (maryschild44 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-01 20:08:41
     

    Wonderful haiku. I'm a "lunatic" and especially appreciate it.

  5.  
    Nanci
    2007-08-01 22:00:53
     

    Me gusta mucho tu haiku. Eso es algo que no he intentado todavia--un haiku en espanol. Muy bien hecho.

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-04 18:54:07
     

    seductive moonlight
    through dark veiled cloud--
    bare loins

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