orange dragonfly
over the koi pond
Hiroshima Day


—Deborah P. Kolodji
        

About the author: Deborah P. Kolodji
Pasadena, California
dkolodji at aol.com

Deborah P Kolodji is the President of the Science Fiction Poetry Association and the editor of Amaze: The Cinquain Journal.

Her work has appeared in many journals, both on and off the web. Unfinished Book, her chapbook of haiku, cinquains, and other short poems, was published by Shadows Ink Publications.

 

Responses to the haiku for 7 August 2007 by Deborah P. Kolodji

  1.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-08-07 08:34:44
     

    Hiroshima sun--
    a little boy in the playground
    screws up his eye

  2.  
    Magyar
    2007-08-07 12:04:32
     

    The dragonfly adds another.

    sixty one years
    counted by the koi
    a dragonfly
    _M

  3.  
    David Wood (wood1438 at sbcglobal dot com)
    2007-08-07 14:51:38
     

    Usa
    Born 1941, friendly 2007
    celebration, rerembrance what?

    sadness off course, me too, what a world

    No offense meant. Tell me about it wood1538@sbcglobal,net I am curious

  4.  
    2007-08-07 20:57:57
     

    Hiroshima Day
    a circle grows larger
    above the koi

    martin

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-12 19:50:12
     

    lt.-col. john mcCrae
    "in flanders fields".

    "in flanders fields the poppies blow
    between the crosses,... ; and in the sky
    the larks, still bravely, singing, fly
    scarce heard amid the guns below.
    we are the dead. short days ago
    we lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
    loved and were loved, and now we lie
    in flanders fields".

    -

    war:
    decision to attack
    decision to resist attack

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