mannequin faces
a cosmetic counter woman
offers a spritz

—Jeffrey Winke
        

About the author: Jeffrey Winke, jeff_winke at yahoo dot com

Jeffrey Winke is an industrial writer and adjunct university professor of modern poetry, business communication and public speaking in Milwaukee, Wis. His recent book What's Not There: Selected Haiku of Jeffrey Winke is a 2002 Merit Book Award winner. His motion graphics haiku collection, Chances, has been selected as a Cool Site winner. And a collection of Winke's essays combined with found art was recently exhibited at Milwaukee's Green Dragon Freedom Cafè gallery.

 

Responses to the haiku for 8 August 2007 by Jeffrey Winke

  1.  
    anthony slauson
    2007-05-29 06:45:01
     

    I really enjoyed the subtle humor in this one

  2.  
    josh wikoff
    2007-08-08 09:12:20
     

    mannequin/cosmetic/spritz

    fabulous word choice for a fresh senryu jeffrey

  3.  
    Megan (markenberg at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-08 15:52:23
     

    Great to see a fellow Milwaukee-ite! :-) I love the word choice on this one. Wonderful senryu, Jeffrey!

    ~Megan

    perfume counter
    he looks for a scent
    to match her dress

  4.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-08-08 19:18:09
     

    A sharp senryu, reminds me of running the gauntlet at Macy's.

  5.  
    Magyar
    2007-08-11 06:39:56
     

    Jeffery;
    Once, I read your words -leaving their smudge on the window of time- and since, I've looked forward to further oppertunities... . Here, with my gaping smile, there is no disappointment. tnx _M

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-12 20:11:15
     

    spring,
    now first frost
    a covering of purple
    petunias

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