heat wave!
the chapel in the snow
screensaver

—Patricia Kelly

About the author: Patricia's weblog contains ruminations and ramblings from retirement including original poetry, scifaiku, and haiku; ideas for working with dreams (e.g. The Tarot) and writing dream-based poems; and actual dream explorations. She can be reached at maryschild44 at yahoo dot com.

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Responses to the haiku for 21 August 2007 by Patricia Kelly

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-08-21 08:16:25
     

    Nicely constructed. Line 3 has a real pop.

  2.  
    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila)
    2007-08-21 11:57:29
     

    Thanks! It was fun to write ... after choosing that "cool" screensaver image ... in a heat wave ... :-)

  3.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-08-21 12:12:29
     

    A favourite of mine, and I just can't resist a haiku with snow in it! ;-)

  4.  
    Megan (markenberg at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-21 15:01:47
     

    Nicely observed! Excellent contrast between images.

    ~Megan

    winter moon...
    the palm trees sway
    on my mouse pad

  5.  
    Josh Wikoff
    2007-08-21 19:56:29
     

    heat shimmer
    a surfer's silhouette
    on the paper cup

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-22 00:27:05
     

    heat wave
    chill from the downed draft
    crossroad pub

  7.  
    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) (maryschild44 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-22 11:35:57
     

    Love those haiku responses. Thanks!

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