lunar eclipse
   i fall for
the hidden ball trick

—Ed Markowski

yes, it was embarrassing

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

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Responses to the haiku for 29 August 2007 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-08-29 03:38:24
     

    dog days moon
    over miami--
    reverie of pennsylvania

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-08-29 07:26:31
     

    Happens to the best of us, even when there's no eclipse. Great jux, fine ku.

  3.  
    Josh Wikoff
    2007-08-29 08:19:32
     

    now you see, it now you don't...

    as bill says, it's a wonderful juxtaposition ed!

    lunar eclipse
    my golf ball disappears
    into water sound

  4.  
    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) (maryschild44 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-08-29 09:57:34
     

    Delightful!

    eclipsed moon
    the palm sized dog
    touches my heart

    (a dreamku, haiku-like poems about dreams, that I'm developing)

  5.  
    Raymona Stabler
    2007-08-29 11:47:52
     

    I read tiny words every day and this kind of response really tickles my funny bone. Thanks

  6.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-08-30 03:58:53
     

    Great example of humour in haiku! ;-)

  7.  
    Roberta Beary
    2007-09-03 12:09:03
     

    images work well, ed. good one.

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