moonrise...
geese argue
with their shadows

—Magyar

As the moon crawls above the tree tops and streaks across the still pond, the Canadas awake into debate.
(first posting - wonderhaikuworlds)

About the author: Kathy and I live along the edge of a pond near Cape Cod. Here I write... how I view nature's plan.

Contact: magyar0109 at aol dot com

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Responses to the haiku for 6 September 2007 by Magyar

  1.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan
    2007-09-06 00:04:39
     

    Great Going Magyar ~ Thank you for acknowledging "Wonder Haiku Worlds"!

  2.  
    electraglide
    2007-09-06 05:29:46
     

    sunset
    I turn my back
    on the night

    'splattered paint sky
    rooftop silhouettes
    cut out of darkness' - anon

    When the meteors came I was stood on the roof (for a better view) - otherwise the street would have been empty.
    :)

  3.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-09-06 08:01:44
     

    Imaginative.

  4.  
    Elena
    2007-09-06 11:42:05
     

    How fresh and familiar. I like to argue with my shadow, too.

  5.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-09-06 12:05:19
     

    a good haiku!

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-09-07 19:16:14
     

    feline clamor
    was it the full moon--
    calico kitten

  7.  
    Magyar
    2007-09-10 05:33:20
     

    For you comments, I thank you all. _M

  8.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan
    2007-09-10 07:53:52
     

    I remember this Haiku Magyar ~ Best Wishes ! Greetings and Good Going !

  9.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-09-11 01:50:57
     

    Simply beautiful Magyar!

    _kala

  10.  
    Marijo
    2007-09-11 11:25:35
     

    Yes, I, too, remember reading this in wonderhaikuworlds. Nice magyar.

  11.  
    Alan Summers
    2007-09-13 02:50:48
     

    A refreshing aural take on a geese haiku. I have enjoyed this haiku, and the geese have stayed with me!

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