pierced by the radio tower on Signal Hill the back-to-school moon

—gK
        

About the author: gK is a member of the Southern California Haiku Study Group. Besides writing haiku, senryu, and tanka, gK also writes science fiction haiku (also known as scifaiku), and is a moderator for the scifaiku mailing list at Yahoo! Groups.

Responses to the haiku for 20 September 2007 by gK

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    Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) (maryschild44 at yahoo dot com)
    2007-09-20 09:56:18
     

    Really nice to see this one here, gK. Love "back-to-school" moon.

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    electraglide
    2007-09-20 10:23:13
     

    -1
    clockwork children march
    through history books turning
    pages into dreams

    I still have my old school satchel. Every decade or so I open it up and look inside. Real leather (poor cow) with graffiti that speaks volumes over the years.. Also, an exercise book for each subject - nothing has changed.

    (a dark ku dude)

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    Ed Schwellenbach
    2007-09-20 15:39:05
     

    Very nice, gK. Back-to-school moon is a great kigo. Your one-liner works well because breaking the moment into three lines would be clumsy at the L1/L2 break.

    Your poem prompted my recollection of "light" affected by "engineered things."

    the blinding glint
    of a passing big rig
    a mudflap girl

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    Alan Summers
    2007-09-20 23:56:34
     

    Really glad to see this haiku on Tinywords. Ed says it so succinctly so I won't say more.

    Interesting haiku by electaglide!

    Really like Ed's mudflap girl, very original!

  5.  
    Ed Schwellenbach
    2007-09-21 06:17:18
     

    Wow, thanks Alan!

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    Mary-Lane Kamberg
    2007-09-21 08:48:32
     

    Love your "signal hill," very evocative. We have a Signal Hill here in Kansas City, too, so I thought you might be from here.

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    gK
    2007-09-21 16:00:40
     

    Thanks everyone.

    The "back-to-school moon" was from a personal project trying to come up with new names for the different moons--sort of a modern-day equivalent to the American Indian names for moons.

    Mary-Lane: If you look at the Wikipedia article for "Signal Hill" or check the Getty Thesaurus of Geographic Names, you'll see numerous Signal Hills, but only one is an incorporated city.

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    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-09-21 16:14:47
     

    early riser chilly greeting of eyes-half-shut

    waxing moon

  9.  
    Mary Griffith
    2007-09-21 18:54:32
     

    fabulous haiku - thanks - and the 'mudflap girl' - perfect.

  10.  
    electraglide
    2007-09-22 03:51:08
     

    SLAPPIN' TIME
    transcontinentals
    speaking shards of bright water
    as we pick mushrooms


    (nice montage ed)

  11.  
    2008-11-02 09:47:47
     

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  12.  
    2008-11-15 13:22:16
     

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