stadium lights
treetops sway 
in wind and mist

—Marie Summers
        

About the author: Marie Summers, the editor of White Lotus, has been published in numerous publications such as bottle rockets, Frogpond, Haiku Harvest, Heron's Nest, Kokako, Mayfly, Modern Haiku, moonset, Paper Wasp, Presence, Simply Haiku, and the World Haiku Review, among others.

 

Responses to the haiku for 3 October 2007 by Marie Summers

  1.  
    Ed Schwellenbach
    2007-10-03 07:34:56
     

    Not a good night to be in the stands, but a very evocative image to recall the times we were. Well done, Marie.

  2.  
    Bill Kenney
    2007-10-03 08:24:46
     

    I see this as an image on my TV screen. Works fine that way.

  3.  
    Bret Wooldridge
    2007-10-03 15:02:17
     

    Woo hoo Marie! I am there, a couple blocks away, Chilled to the bone and waiting for the game to be called.

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-10-04 17:08:50
     

    lisp of a figure
    shadowing semidark street
    fog shrouded crescent

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