autumn twilight ...
swan shapes separate
for the lone boatman

—Alan Summers
        

Published:
City: Bristol Today in Poems and Pictures ISBN: 0954811704 (2004)

British Haiku Society members anthology ‘River’ 2005

Snapshots haiku journal 10
ISSN 1461-0833 Oct 2001

About the author: Alan's haiku and poetry is published in over 60 anthologies, and a number of languages. He regularly reads, performs, and workshops from venues as diverse as possible including shop windows; inner city rainforests; cliff tops; to the more orthodox places...on occasion. His website is: http://www.withwords.org.uk

Contact: alan at withwords dot org dot uk

Responses to the haiku for 5 November 2007 by Alan Summers

  1.  
    kala ramesh
    2007-11-05 00:11:57
     

    autumn twilight ...
    swan shapes separate
    for the lone boatman

    I love the way the lines resonate with each other.

    Great work Alan.

    _kala

  2.  
    magyar
    2007-11-05 06:59:13
     

    Alan, This is a grand view of seasonal co-existance!
    _These gentle swans swim aside, allowing the boatman to pass through. [Early spring? If there were -chicks- 'twould be a different scene... their innate parental protection taking over.] _M

  3.  
    Karen Summers
    2007-11-05 08:02:15
     

    One of my favourites of yours Alan. A genuinely calming poem for a rushed Monday. Karen x

  4.  
    Andrea (andrea dot cecon at gmail dot com)
    2007-11-05 12:33:07
     

    I love it... great work indeed!

  5.  
    Helen Buckingham
    2007-11-05 12:38:29
     

    Beautiful, Alan.

  6.  
    Mary Griffith
    2007-11-05 18:06:23
     

    What a lovely mystical moment you have given us. Thank you.

  7.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-05 20:32:53
     

    autumn's dawn
    crossing darken mirrored lake--
    solitary drake's ripple

  8.  
    laryalee
    2007-11-06 16:43:25
     

    Lovely view, Alan...
    wistful and haunting...as if there's
    an unspoken bond between them.
    ;)
    Lary

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