leonids --
the sparkle
in her laugh

—Deborah P. Kolodji

About the author: Deborah P. Kolodji
Pasadena, California
dkolodji at aol.com

Deborah P Kolodji is the President of the Science Fiction Poetry Association and the editor of Amaze: The Cinquain Journal.

Her work has appeared in many journals, both on and off the web. Unfinished Book, her chapbook of haiku, cinquains, and other short poems, was published by Shadows Ink Publications.

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Responses to the haiku for 19 November 2007 by Deborah P. Kolodji

  1.  
    Penelope
    2007-11-20 04:50:52
     

    sparkly original
    imagining her smile
    n-i-i-i-ce!

  2.  
    magyar
    2007-11-20 06:02:35
     

    Deborah,
    _A fine link [that 'conversation'] between the sparkle of her [young?] smile and... meteors that are more than -just burning rocks-.

    across the dark
    these bouquets of stars
    rock gardens
    _M

  3.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-11-22 14:44:01
     

    one frozen tear
    this night, the stars fell
    leonids

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