winter fog --
she decides to colour
her hair 

—Susan Constable
        

About the author: Susan's haiku have appeared in numerous print and on-line journals. Retired from dual careers - education and business - she lives on the west coast of Canada, where nature provides many wonderful haiku moments.

Responses to the haiku for 5 December 2007 by Susan Constable

  1.  
    Charles Passy
    2007-12-05 04:45:02
     

    Hey haiku fans: Would love your thoughts on this...:

    http://www.palmbeachpost.com/blogs/content/shared-blogs/palmbeach/hungryman/entries/2007/12/04/

  2.  
    Helen Buckingham
    2007-12-05 06:57:56
     

    Love it.

  3.  
    2007-12-05 07:10:05
     

    Good one!

  4.  
    josh wikoff
    2007-12-05 08:22:27
     

    Nice jux, great line break and that audacious Constable humour...Love it!

  5.  
    2007-12-05 10:08:32
     

    Made me smile :) She better dyes them in fluorescent colors

  6.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2007-12-05 10:15:40
     

    a very good haiku!

  7.  
    laryalee
    2007-12-05 21:30:15
     

    Yep, that should get rid of the fog, lol!
    Good one, Susan!
    ;)
    Lary

  8.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2007-12-06 09:57:29
     

    pointing past an evening star--
    this greying oak
    gnarled limb

  9.  
    Susan
    2007-12-06 10:33:48
     

    Hi Charles.

    Thanks, Helen.

    Audacious, Josh? lol Good to hear from you.

    Lime green, maybe, Ricardas? :-)

    Thanks, Angelika!

    Thank you, Lary. I call it purple; she calls it 'burgandy highlights'. lol

    Nice one, BMR.

    I appreciate all of you for taking the time to read and comment. Thanks so much!

    Susan

  10.  
    h. gene murtha (hgmurtha at gmail dot com)
    2008-02-15 08:19:20
     

    ...and now do you feel like a butterfly
    Susan Nice.

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