wedding day
the bride tries to avoid
the widow's hug


—Petar Tchouhov
        

About the author: I live in Sofia, the capital of Bulgaria, in Eastern Europe, where I write poetry, short stories and novels, music and lyrics, and play guitar for various rock bands. My haiku are published in Frogpond, Haiku Presence, Ginyu, World Haiku 2006, Simply Haiku, Full Moon, Roadrunner, Haikuworld, and Mainichi Daily News. I like comic books, rodents, traveling, and beer.

contact: cheshoboy at yahoo dot com

Responses to the haiku for 24 January 2008 by Petar Tchouhov

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2008-01-24 07:33:10
     

    An effectively disturbing moment, petar.

  2.  
    jem
    2008-01-24 07:59:17
     

    I really like this. There is a strong story being told here.

  3.  
    Aurora
    2008-01-24 09:30:08
     

    Excellent.

  4.  
    Melissa
    2008-01-24 10:23:59
     

    Wow, Petar! This is powerful and beautifully concise. It's perfect. Thank you for this.

  5.  
    Alan Summers
    2008-01-25 07:22:54
     

    Sharp and chilling. Look forward to even more of your haiku! ;-)

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-01-30 04:01:17
     

    bride's relief
    after the wedding--
    fellas plan another outing

    -

    decided to check todays acceptance of "fella".
    thought this rather apropos: informal term for a man; "you lucky dog"...

  7.  
    Angelika
    2008-01-30 11:32:14
     

    a good senryŻ!

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