another gray morning
all the potholes
full of rain

—Eric Houck Jr.

first published in "the backroads of delaware county," a book of haiga by Eric L. Houck Jr.

About the author: eric's haiku have appeared in numerous journals worldwide. he currently resides in San Diego, CA.

Contact: erichouckjr at usa dot net

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  1.  
    Magyar (magyar0109 at aol dot com)
    2008-01-28 10:54:13
     

    a new pothole
    full of last nights rain
    walkers duck
    _m

  2.  
    josh wikoff
    2008-01-28 10:55:24
     

    Yup...

    scudding clouds
    just like yesterday
    winter seclusion

  3.  
    Brian
    2008-01-28 16:22:56
     

    rainy day
    the road full of potholes
    smooth again

  4.  
    Aurora
    2008-01-28 16:28:04
     

    Nice to see you here. :)

  5.  
    Bill Kenney
    2008-01-28 21:07:34
     

    Such a grumpy ku it makes me smile.

  6.  
    laryalee
    2008-01-29 09:20:37
     

    Hi Eric,
    I echo Bill...this is so wonderfully depressing!
    And with a nowhere-to-go-but-up feeling.
    ;)
    Lary

  7.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-01-30 04:25:49
     

    crossing the horizon
    thoughts of where's prado--
    another grey morning

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