one more step to the top
the falling snowflakes
a little louder


—Elena Naskova
        

About the author: I was born and raised in Macedonia. I now live in Seattle and I love the trees and the rain. I write mostly haiku and plays.

Contact: samoil99 at earthlink dot net

Responses to the haiku for 7 February 2008 by Elena Naskova

  1.  
    magyar (magyar0109 at aol dot com)
    2008-02-07 12:13:40
     

    Nicely done Elena_!
    _This... this year's first snow fall, an echo.

    first snow...
    this mountain brook
    seems louder
    _m

  2.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-02-13 05:36:43
     

    bone chilling rain
    through her alpaca sweater--
    twin peaks

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