a dinner bell
  rings & rings...
evening snow

—Ed Markowski
        

mineral point, wisconsin. january,
2000

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

Responses to the haiku for 11 February 2008 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Roberta Beary
    2008-02-11 14:23:59
     

    nice one, ed. here's one of mine.

    dinner bell
    rosebuds float
    in a crystal bowl

    frogpond XXXI no. 1

  2.  
    L.G. Sand
    2008-02-11 14:40:27
     

    Ed

    Don't you think the use of "evening" is redundant given that you have told us the time with "dinner bell"?

  3.  
    mike farley
    2008-02-11 18:18:37
     

    noon whistle
    a redtail hawk watches
    from the treetop

  4.  
    Bill Kenney
    2008-02-12 08:26:23
     

    dinner bell
    accelerating
    wheelchairs

    Did something happen at Mineral Point in January 2000?

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-02-29 04:48:18
     

    quelled dinner bell--
    last drake quacks
    over frozen morsel

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