a dinner bell
  rings & rings...
evening snow

—Ed Markowski

mineral point, wisconsin. january,
2000

About the author: ed markowski lives and writes in auburn hills, michigan. his work has appeared in modern haiku, acorn, bottle rockets, and the birmingham poetry review.

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Responses to the haiku for 11 February 2008 by Ed Markowski

  1.  
    Roberta Beary
    2008-02-11 14:23:59
     

    nice one, ed. here's one of mine.

    dinner bell
    rosebuds float
    in a crystal bowl

    frogpond XXXI no. 1

  2.  
    L.G. Sand
    2008-02-11 14:40:27
     

    Ed

    Don't you think the use of "evening" is redundant given that you have told us the time with "dinner bell"?

  3.  
    mike farley
    2008-02-11 18:18:37
     

    noon whistle
    a redtail hawk watches
    from the treetop

  4.  
    Bill Kenney
    2008-02-12 08:26:23
     

    dinner bell
    accelerating
    wheelchairs

    Did something happen at Mineral Point in January 2000?

  5.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-02-29 04:48:18
     

    quelled dinner bell--
    last drake quacks
    over frozen morsel

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