lake crossing
dusk lingers in the ice


—Martin Gottlieb Cohen
        

About the author: Martin Cohen was born in the South Bronx somewhere on Simpson Street, went to a Yeshiva on East Broadway and Canal Street, and then lived in the South of Brooklyn, the South of Long Island, The Southern Tier of Upstate New York, The South of Manhattan, and finally South Jersey in Egg Harbor.

Martin's e-mail address: martin1223 at comcast dot net

Martin also has a weblog.

Responses to the haiku for 21 February 2008 by Martin Gottlieb Cohen

  1.  
    Bill Kenney
    2008-02-21 18:17:38
     

    Suggestive and haunting.

  2.  
    H. Gene Murtha
    2008-02-22 13:52:10
     

    ...interesting observation neighbor.

  3.  
    Alan Summers
    2008-02-25 05:43:31
     

    Agree with both comments. It's nice to have imagery "a bit different" too!

  4.  
    martin
    2008-02-27 12:31:12
     

    Thanks Bill, neighbor H. Gene, and Alan for all your thoughts.

  5.  
    Georgia
    2008-03-01 10:45:37
     

    Highly imaginative, evocative, effective.

    I'm just catching up after having been unavoidably away from tinywords for several months, & am surprised to discover that such a wonderful haiku received so few responses. But the few were of high quality, which counts immensely.

  6.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-03-14 17:40:10
     

    sliding cross crumpled sheets--
    dawn's warm kiss

  7.  
    Bernard Gieske
    2008-10-20 06:11:50
     

    I once saw a small fish frozen in the ice, but this adds a lot more to that experience.

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