tinywords: haiku for 3 March 2008 by Jordi Climent

all are in a hurry -
in the beggar's hand
only the rain

—Jordi Climent

About the author: Jordi Climent, jclimentb at gmail dot com

published 3 March 2008
in haiku

Responses to the haiku for 3 March 2008 by Jordi Climent

josh wikoff

2008-03-03 10:27:23

Buen trabajo, Jordi.

gotas gordas—
modedas en la lata
del mendigo
il.balan

2008-03-03 14:10:18

el mendigo
vuelve a bajar la mano -
atardecer

saludos
Dirk van Nouhuys

2008-03-03 14:44:54

Wow! moving, mind opening, pointed
Ross Clark

2008-03-03 16:22:29

I like the uninvolved simplicity of this. [a tanka of mine:]

after i pray
my hands fall open
like a beggar’s
at worst the sky
will give rain
Kurvin

2008-03-04 08:12:20

Wow...
this one is really a great haiku
Monica (MonicaHenryLaw at gmail dot com)

2008-03-05 12:11:10

Beautiful, with a subtle political statement. Thank you for sharing this.
b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)

2008-03-07 19:19:57

evening commute--
in a rush
white ibis flock
veers off

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things one sees when traffic slows; specially low flying birds attempting to cross the freeway...
Bernard Gieske

2008-10-23 12:07:16

The picture is so clear yet provides a great opportunity to question our daily lives and activities.
Manu Kant

2009-08-31 07:17:23

Really good

Another one from me

beggars
outstretched hands
trickle down effect

Manu Kant