spring breeze --
three little girls run 
into the sky 

—Narayanan Raghunathan

About the author: My fields of activity are Philosophy (Universal Religion, Mysticism), Mathematics (Transcendental Numbers, Infinite Continued Fractions, General Number Theory, Foundations of Mathematics), Poetry, Music (Indian Karnaatik and Dhrupad(Hindusthani), Musicology), Dance (Neo-Classical), Photography and Graphics, and Farming. I have published the following books 1] Kalki ~ The Last Coming 2] Scrap Bits from The Note-Books of a Lunatic 3] Infinite Flame Silences(Haiku) 4] Apocalyptic Rapture(Haiku~ With Amanda) 5] The Solitary Infinity: Obituary To Transfinity.

Contact: aum_raudrabrahmanarayanan at yahoo dot com

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  1.  
    Norman Darlington
    2008-03-12 16:02:53
     

    spring breeze --
    three little girls run
    into the sky

    Dear Narayanan
    This is delightful. You capture all the innocence and wonder of childhood in these few words.

    It was great to meet you last month; a pity only that we didn't find more time to talk!

    Till next time...
    Norman

  2.  
    Melissa Spurr
    2008-03-12 16:25:26
     

    Very sweet image, Narayanan. It made me smile. Thank you!

  3.  
    magyar (magyar0109 at aol dot com)
    2008-03-12 16:45:10
     

    _Friend Narayanan; So much said... such simple words; the crux of haiku. As always, _m

  4.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan (aum_raudrabrahmanarayanan at yahoo dot com)
    2008-03-12 22:02:03
     

    Thank you Norman ~ Surely it was a pity we could not conjure time to converse more ! Thank you Melissa and Magyar.

  5.  
    Alan Summers
    2008-03-13 03:37:25
     

    Beautifully unadorned, simply gorgeous.

  6.  
    Penelope
    2008-03-13 07:10:29
     

    hum of bees
    a few skinned knees
    fresh pink peonies

  7.  
    josh wikoff
    2008-03-13 08:14:21
     

    spring breeze --
    three little girls run
    into the sky /nr

    only to fall again,
    these cherry petals /jw

  8.  
    Barbara A Taylor
    2008-03-13 16:17:41
     

    This is simply lovely;
    thankyou

    B

  9.  
    laryalee
    2008-03-16 11:40:36
     

    Narayanan, I love the warmth
    and innocence here...very nice!
    ;)
    Lary

  10.  
    Marijo
    2008-03-16 12:33:10
     

    Narayanan, I like the simplicity of your haiku and very nice imagery.

  11.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-03-17 16:36:30
     

    winter now silent
    perched in a tree...
    this black bird, this dove, a sparrow

  12.  
    Narayanan Raghunathan (aum_raudrabrahmanarayanan at yahoo dot com)
    2008-03-22 04:48:37
     

    Thank you Alan, Penelope, josh, Barbara, Laryalee, Marijo & Bob

    spring breeze --
    three little girls run
    into the sky /nr

    only to fall again,
    these cherry petals /jw

    new dreams melt
    from the blossoms ~
    a blue butterfly /nr

  13.  
    A Thiagarajan
    2008-04-10 20:24:47
     

    Quite a realistic pix. Knowing you, the question, was it Shiva watching it (did he have girls, sisters to Ganesh and Muruga?

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