stone wall -
the spring wind fills
all the cracks

—Dana-Maria Onica
        

About the author: Dana-Maria Onica: anacadarin at yahoo dot fr

 

Responses to the haiku for 17 March 2008 by Dana-Maria Onica

  1.  
    Magyar (magyar0109 at aol dot com)
    2008-03-17 04:21:34
     

    Nicely done, Dana-Maria !
    ...and the evening candle flutters. _m

  2.  
    Alan Summers
    2008-03-17 05:24:27
     

    Very atmospheric. Beautifully subtle "sound image" as well as being a "visual image".

  3.  
    terrytip
    2008-03-17 10:34:52
     

    roots__
    searching for moisture
    between the cracks

  4.  
    Penelope
    2008-03-17 12:17:03
     

    cold as stone
    the spring wind
    ~ ~ blows ~ ~

  5.  
    Norman Darlington
    2008-03-17 12:38:31
     

    stone wall -
    the spring wind fills
    all the cracks

    Wonderful poem, Dana Maria. Tactile, almost synaesthetic.

  6.  
    Angelika Wienert
    2008-03-17 12:46:24
     

    the verb (fills) works very well in this haiku!

    well done!

  7.  
    Andrea
    2008-03-17 13:58:31
     

    Visual,
    tangible, in some way...

    beautiful.

  8.  
    Dirk van Nouhuys (DHvN at wandd dot com)
    2008-03-17 14:09:28
     

    Good work, rings the senses: acoustic, kinesthetic, thermal.

  9.  
    2008-03-17 15:51:37
     

    Terrific haiku... the kind that stays with you over the course of the day.

  10.  
    laryalee
    2008-03-17 16:41:38
     

    Dana-Maria, how wonderful to see you here,
    and to enjoy this lovely moment!
    ;)
    Lary

  11.  
    ceegeeess (ceegeeess at gmail dot com)
    2008-03-17 18:12:18
     

    Beautiful indeed!
    Every deed we do filled
    With talented word!

  12.  
    Bill Kenney
    2008-03-17 18:12:57
     

    Superb, Dana-Maria.

  13.  
    2008-03-17 18:13:04
     

    this is an EXCELLENT haiku. really captures spring and exudes freshness.

  14.  
    2008-03-17 20:58:29
     

    g'day

    I love this! Having recently returned from Ireland I am enamoured with stone walls.


    Peace and Love

  15.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-03-18 04:04:36
     

    march winds whipping
    trees into a frenzy--
    my shadow bracing the wall

  16.  
    Jen
    2008-03-18 09:21:46
     

    Good one! I love when your haiku turn up on this site. :)

  17.  
    Dana-Maria Onica
    2008-03-18 22:36:24
     

    Dear friends,

    Thank you very much for your beautiful poems and your kind words.
    My merit is very small. My thanks and gratitude go to my neighbours, the mountains, my faithful friend, the wind, to you, my friends, who guide and inspire my work, and to our editor, Dylan Tweney.

    Dana-Maria

  18.  
    2008-03-19 23:11:37
     

    A memorable haiku,Dana.Thank you.

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