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Responses to the haiku for 21 March 2008 by Ed Markowski

1.  
   Bill Kenney
   2008-03-21 06:39:53
    

   Very good, Ed. "trickles" is an excellent choice and beautifully placed.

2.  
   mike farley
   2008-03-21 07:20:29
    

   weathered siding
   snow leaves the barn
   one drip at a time

3.  
   Megan
   2008-03-21 07:34:20
    

   Wonderful image, Ed! I agree with Bill about "trickles" - perfect word choice. I like the implied time lapse with the "mound of snow" trickling.
   
   spring cleaning
   the slow gutter murmur
   of yesterday's rain

4.  
   josh wikoff
   2008-03-21 10:00:18
    

   spring cleaning
   the last mound of snow trickles
   down the driveway
   
   a sleepy murmur
   from her carseat

5.  
   Merlin
   2008-03-21 10:39:16
    

   spring warmth
   seeping, slowly in the bone
   flowers waking

6.  
   Angelika Wienert
   2008-03-21 12:01:34
    

   yeah! i like this haiku (especially "trickles")

7.  
   Yvonne Cabalona
   2008-03-21 13:34:44
    

   Very nice, Ed. Very well done.

8.  
   r knutski
   2008-03-21 15:28:49
    

   HER SMILE;
   
   A BRIGHT GREEN GRASS
   
   AROUND THIS GLISTENING
   
   IN THE SUNSHINE
   
   SNOW DRIFT RESTING

9.  
   laryalee
   2008-03-21 18:39:50
    

   Nice one, Ed...and how well I know that feeling of watching the last mound of snow trickle away.
   ;)
   Lary

10.  
    Kat Knapp
    2008-03-22 06:40:16
     

    Were you looking up my driveway when you wrote this? It's so "right on". Spring in Northern Wisconsin.

11.  
    shankar
    2008-03-24 03:04:37
     

    Very well done dear Ed!

12.  
    Penelope
    2008-03-24 09:24:00
     

    tickling dust mop
    naked
    spring cleaning

13.  
    Bill Zimmer
    2008-03-24 18:47:37
     

    Ed, I really enjoyed your Spring images! I agree with Kat, but from St. Paul, MN.
    
    The green park statue
    Posing on brown Springtime grass
    Speaks to snow patches

14.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-03-26 04:37:35
     

    crud cleansing from
    nature's winter face
    river overflowing banks

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