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Responses to the haiku for 9 May 2008 by Ed Markowski

1.  
   terrytip
   2008-05-09 12:11:44
    

   bar-b-que
   chuckwagon steak
   sundown smoke

2.  
   Penelope (rides on by)
   2008-05-09 12:25:44
    

   prairie sunset
   the glow of the cattleman's
   branding iron
   still warm
   the coffee now bitter
   cold descends
   stoking the fire
   beans and bacon
   morning comes
   too soon....

3.  
   toby evans
   2008-05-09 12:41:41
    

   this is a perfect haiku in my opinion.
   cinematic & perfectly juxtaposed
   T

4.  
   Helen Buckingham
   2008-05-09 13:36:37
    

   Ditto cinematic - but nonetheless 'real'. Great stuff.

5.  
   Dirk van Nouhuys
   2008-05-09 15:08:43
    

   Ditto cinematic and good, like the movie western versions of movies like the 7 samurai.

6.  
   Bill Kenney
   2008-05-09 15:28:26
    

   Cinematic, dramatic, but not in the least overstated. A Markowski gem.

7.  
   Paul
   2008-05-10 05:39:13
    

   Not bad
   this haiku,
   but I have seen better.

8.  
   b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
   2008-05-10 17:32:42
    

   smoke from the fire
   snaking cross the glades--
   this glowing sunset

9.  
   magyar
   2008-05-11 07:22:40
    

   Ed, You've teased all my senses... either directly or subliminally!
   
   sunset
   blankets this lowing herd
   campfires mime
   
   _m

10.  
    Ricardas
    2008-05-12 08:19:18
     

    Nice haiku. Sunset is time rich indeed of great views to write about.

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