stolen kisses
barn swallows twitter
in the eaves

—Mike Farley

About the author: I live with my wife Shirlee on a cattle ranch near the little ski town of Red Lodge, Montana, and have been loving and writing haiku for several years now. I draw my inspiration from the images of the high-plains, mountains, weather, wildlife, livestock, ranch work and outdoor recreation which surround me daily.

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Responses to the haiku for 29 May 2008 by Mike Farley

  1.  
    Kujtim Agalliu
    2008-05-29 13:42:01
     

    Hi, Mike
    it is very nice!

    on the tip of the elm-tree,
    gusher sparrows are hushing.
    the nightingales arrived...

  2.  
    Wende (wende at duflondesign dot com)
    2008-05-29 14:28:56
     

    This is so very lovely....sensual, timeless, descriptive--makes me think of three pm that lovely time of day before the magnetic pulls of dusk come on. Congratulations

  3.  
    Barbara A Taylor
    2008-05-29 16:38:48
     

    g'day Mike

    This was lovely to wake up to on this wet day on the mountain top; it took me back to my youth.

    Peace and Love

  4.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-05-29 17:57:33
     

    michael, here i thought i was alone, once more; observing birds, from many species, seemingly oblivious to my stolen kisses, with kisses of their own...

    -

    ruffling of feathers--
    her hand
    rakes through my hair

  5.  
    laryalee
    2008-06-05 10:15:09
     

    This is tender and delightful!

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