after the rain
tall grass drowning
rewritten by the author after reading Patrick Gallagher's commentary on Ishihara's dictum in Haijinx II:1
About the author: I've been studying and writing haiku for a little over a year. After participating in a scifaiku list for a couple of years, I began to focus on more traditional haiku.
email: mikeg_56 at yahoo dot com
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