after the rain
tall grass drowning
in puddles


—Mike Gregory
        

rewritten by the author after reading Patrick Gallagher's commentary on Ishihara's dictum in Haijinx II:1

About the author: I've been studying and writing haiku for a little over a year. After participating in a scifaiku list for a couple of years, I began to focus on more traditional haiku.

email: mikeg_56 at yahoo dot com

 

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