from the river
where I was baptized
washes over me
Issue 10.2 | 20 September 2010
Just lovely! What a smooth turn from L3 through L5. Great tanka Aubrie.
wonderful tanka, Aubrie! Nice to see your poem in my in-box…
Lovely image of what was and is now.
Very nice indeed. I find myself identifying with this poem, and on more than one level. And also, I had thought Tinywords had folded and am glad to see it is alive.
a baptism of water and light;
many levels to this beautiful little poem;
Lovely little poem. Hope you keep up the good work. I'd love to read a longer one based in a fantasy world!
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