anniversary day –
snail tracks crisscrossing
Issue 14.2 | 1 October 2014
We tread politely,
careful not to crush a snail
exploring damp stone.
snail in a leaf
against October's chill
Snails are soooooooo haiku! :-)
The Present Continuous is a potent device in the right hands, fortunately you have the right hands. Excellent use of juxtaposition, and allowing the reader to make their own decisions as a reader.
pull of stars turning cold the snail's navigation
Publications credits (one line haiku):
Does Fish-God Know (YTBN Press 2012); Blithe Spirit (February 2013)
Lovely, and leaves lots of room for reflection!
the sand etched
Notes from the Gean, June 2011
I love this! Beautiful & funny(to me). Thx!
I love snail poems!
Yours is suitably open to allow readers to complete it with their own experiences.
even the snail
Issa's Untidy Hut – Wednesday Haiku, January 16, 2013
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