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winter shore —
shell fragments spill
from the surf
—HAROLD BOWES
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This is the second shells and beach haiku I've read in a couple of weeks, and I've learnt that the author probably means normal seashells, and not spent munitions.
But I constantly connect the two because we spend so much on killing other people, and also racking up the pollution in our seas.
There's an unusual amount of alliteration, and the 's' sound is a tricky one. I kept going back into a whisper, Is that intended? Like the whisper of surf as it reaches the beach…
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skuas in from smog
pause in their reflection
the tide washed beach
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Huntingdon Beach, Los Angeles, California, USA
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Alan Summers
Publications credits: Haiku Spirit (Eire, 1996)
I love the sound in this haiku – the final word is just like the hiss of the tide as it pulls back across shingle and broken shells. I live by the shore and this really works.
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March 2nd, 2015 at 12:44 pm
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.
winter shore —
shell fragments spill
from the surf
—HAROLD BOWES
.
.
This is the second shells and beach haiku I've read in a couple of weeks, and I've learnt that the author probably means normal seashells, and not spent munitions.
But I constantly connect the two because we spend so much on killing other people, and also racking up the pollution in our seas.
There's an unusual amount of alliteration, and the 's' sound is a tricky one. I kept going back into a whisper, Is that intended? Like the whisper of surf as it reaches the beach…
.
.
skuas in from smog
pause in their reflection
the tide washed beach
.
.
Huntingdon Beach, Los Angeles, California, USA
.
.
Alan Summers
Publications credits: Haiku Spirit (Eire, 1996)
March 2nd, 2015 at 3:57 pm
Harold, I really do get a feeling for the ferocity of this winter sea, and it is a sea I love.
shells litter the beach
thrown away
by the waves
Written a while ago, but apt for this moment in time.
March 2nd, 2015 at 4:56 pm
Beautiful…perfect choice of EACH word to flood the reader with nostalgia…an elusive "flashback"…but…what happened to 5/7/5?
March 3rd, 2015 at 9:03 am
HI Pearl,
I liked what you said:
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' Beautiful…perfect choice of EACH word to flood the reader with nostalgia…an elusive "flashback" '
warm regards,
Alan
March 5th, 2015 at 11:50 am
Yes, the sea is strong here!
March 6th, 2015 at 2:45 pm
I love the sound in this haiku – the final word is just like the hiss of the tide as it pulls back across shingle and broken shells. I live by the shore and this really works.
marion
May 19th, 2015 at 10:42 am
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