the cat and I chasing
the same fly
—Marie Louise Munro
Issue 18.2 | 9 October 2018
I love how playfully you capture the moment.
Great! Perhaps consider changing "chasing" to chase.
our cat catapults
—MARIE LOUISE MUNRO
I like how you choose the present continuous so it feels like an extended Indian Summer as well as an hour or two just messing around chasing a fly with the cat!
colour book the cat becomes marmalade
Right Hand Pointing issue 95 h a i k u edition (February 2016)
edited by Eric Burke
What a sense of joy. Thank you for this.
Thanks Gaby, Alan, Jean, papagreenbean and pbergonzi!
Light hearted and lovely!
heat the bumble bee faces me
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