black friday two crows tear at a plastic bag
—Jennifer Hambrick
Issue 18.2 | 23 November 2018
I think I saw those birds at the mall…. Love this haiku!
perfect!
Thank you so much, Kathy!
Those scavengers tearing at plastic gets at the violence and futility beautifully.
Thank you so much, Gaby.
Works so well! A perfect reflection.
Thank you, Bob!
Love this.
I'm so glad, Jean! Thank you!
I'm sure you did see these crows at the mall, Alexa. Thanks so much for your kind words.
It’s appropriate that it is a plastic bag they are fighting over, Jennifer. Yes, there is the connection with shopping but also the fact that it is an item of no use to them and they still squabble over it on Black Friday is a great observation.
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November 23rd, 2018 at 9:32 am
I think I saw those birds at the mall…. Love this haiku!
November 23rd, 2018 at 10:39 am
perfect!
November 27th, 2018 at 6:49 am
Thank you so much, Kathy!
November 23rd, 2018 at 10:44 am
Those scavengers tearing at plastic gets at the violence and futility beautifully.
November 27th, 2018 at 6:48 am
Thank you so much, Gaby.
November 23rd, 2018 at 10:55 am
Works so well! A perfect reflection.
November 27th, 2018 at 6:50 am
Thank you, Bob!
November 24th, 2018 at 6:57 am
Love this.
November 27th, 2018 at 6:49 am
I'm so glad, Jean! Thank you!
November 27th, 2018 at 6:51 am
I'm sure you did see these crows at the mall, Alexa. Thanks so much for your kind words.
November 27th, 2018 at 8:19 am
It’s appropriate that it is a plastic bag they are fighting over, Jennifer. Yes, there is the connection with shopping but also the fact that it is an item of no use to them and they still squabble over it on Black Friday is a great observation.
marion