making sandcastles
my son fills the moat
from his bladder

 

 

(Runner-up in Haiku Calendar Competition, 2015)


4 Responses

  1. Sara McNulty Says:

    I just love this!

  2. Magyar Says:

    __ Tracey, such realistic humor positioned within your senryu, priceless! _m

  3. Dirk van Nouhuys Says:

    elegant in it's very vulgarity

  4. Alan Summers Says:

    Excellent use of a natural function, and after all don't adults do this, flooding the oceans with raw sewage? I'm sure there was a photo of me as a six year old at the seaside, completely starkers, and it might have been before or after I built a river. :-)

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