february walk
our breath clouds
side by side

 


11 Responses

  1. Alan Summers Says:

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    february walk
    our breath clouds
    side by side

    —ISABELLA KRAMER

    Wonderfully quiet haiku.

    Alan

  2. veredit Says:

    Warmest thanks, Alan, for your lovely response, so much appreciated. These haiku has a very special meaning to me and I'm very grateful for this beautiful publication.

    isabellla

  3. Alan Summers Says:

    Thanks Isabella, and yes, it's very special.

    Alan

  4. andreacecon Says:

    Quiet & lovely…

  5. veredit Says:

    Many thanks for your kind feedback.

    isabella

  6. magyar Says:

    Fantastic Isabella !
    __ We've had many parallel conversations, and now.my… "Breath Cloud"… quickly follows you during your February Walk; such a grand and climatic verse, Isabella ! _m

  7. veredit Says:

    Thank you so very much, Magyar!
    For all these wonderful years of friendship, feedback, and inspiration! And now this wonderful compliment about this ku – heartfelt thanks.

    isabella

  8. Jo Balistreri Says:

    a very gentle haiku. I enjoyed participating in it.

  9. veredit Says:

    Thank you very much, Jo, for your wonderful response. So pleased that you like it.

    isabella

  10. David Smedley Says:

    I like the double way "side by side" can conjure different imagery, more depth is achieved.

  11. Peggy French Says:

    very lovely, enjoyed it very much.

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