With the current weather here in Blighty, the green is about all that's forgiving the rain...and the wind...and the grey...and...I'll stop there. :)
David Fox
2008-03-13 17:48:28
Lynne,
I loved this haiku! Eloquent, simple wording -- yet so profound in its meaning! Well said!
~David Fox
terrytip
2008-03-13 18:13:11
spurting up
above the puddles
spring flowers
terrytip
Bill Kenney
2008-03-13 19:37:37
Beautifully turned, Lynne.
zoe crosse
2008-03-14 00:41:53
a resolute affirmation of the sublime
executed with grounding precision,
the words have wieght.
Maureen Witt
2008-03-14 01:16:57
Rain puddles, Nature's
mirrors,reflections rippled
by bathing birds wings.
Penelope
2008-03-14 03:36:19
"...like tears in the rain."
Quite the quite, Lynne.
Reason A.
2008-03-14 03:53:57
Or in another venue common to some:
all this green
forgiving the rain
mud on the track
Melissa Spurr
2008-03-14 09:32:33
Such a novel way to see the rain. Very nice!
rain puddle
sunshine drys up
reflections
judith ingram (super dot ingram at verizon dot net)
2008-03-15 14:13:54
"All this green forgiving the rain."
succinct and so eloquent. I'll remember you forever for this gift!
I loved Philip McDonnell's reply. We've all been there.
Frances Ruth Harris
2008-03-16 01:44:03
Thank you. What is important and moving you've
so simply and beautifully executed!
It brings my mind to times I have spent with
the green and wet and spony mosses as they
begin to appear when two environments meet.
laryalee
2008-03-16 11:38:13
Hi Lynne,
this is simply beautiful!
And beautifully simple --
yet complex.
Good to see you here!
;)
Lary
b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
2008-03-17 18:06:29
once more spring all at once...
winter succumbs again
Welcome to Tinywords Lynne!
I hope to see more of your haiku here.
Good original haiku.
so resonant of last summer - the water guttering down leaves, dripping into the canals
Welcome to tinywords, Lynne.
I've told you what a fan I am of your work and this poem is no exception.
all this green forgiving the rain /lr
some pale blue water held within leaves /jw
i enjoyed to read about "all this green..."!
Very nice! Thanks.
With the current weather here in Blighty, the green is about all that's forgiving the rain...and the wind...and the grey...and...I'll stop there. :)
Lynne,
I loved this haiku! Eloquent, simple wording -- yet so profound in its meaning! Well said!
~David Fox
spurting up
above the puddles
spring flowers
terrytip
Beautifully turned, Lynne.
a resolute affirmation of the sublime
executed with grounding precision,
the words have wieght.
Rain puddles, Nature's
mirrors,reflections rippled
by bathing birds wings.
"...like tears in the rain."
Quite the quite, Lynne.
Or in another venue common to some:
all this green
forgiving the rain
mud on the track
Such a novel way to see the rain. Very nice!
rain puddle
sunshine drys up
reflections
"All this green forgiving the rain."
succinct and so eloquent. I'll remember you forever for this gift!
I loved Philip McDonnell's reply. We've all been there.
Thank you. What is important and moving you've
so simply and beautifully executed!
It brings my mind to times I have spent with
the green and wet and spony mosses as they
begin to appear when two environments meet.
Hi Lynne,
this is simply beautiful!
And beautifully simple --
yet complex.
Good to see you here!
;)
Lary
once more spring all at once...
winter succumbs again