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Responses to the haiku for 13 March 2008 by Lynne Rees

1.  
   Alan Summers
   2008-03-13 12:22:35
    

   Welcome to Tinywords Lynne!
   
   I hope to see more of your haiku here.
   
   Good original haiku.

2.  
   Caroline Fox Betts
   2008-03-13 12:33:47
    

   so resonant of last summer - the water guttering down leaves, dripping into the canals

3.  
   josh wikoff
   2008-03-13 13:03:15
    

   Welcome to tinywords, Lynne.
   
   I've told you what a fan I am of your work and this poem is no exception.
   
   all this green forgiving the rain /lr
   
   some pale blue water held within leaves /jw

4.  
   Angelika Wienert
   2008-03-13 13:26:05
    

   i enjoyed to read about "all this green..."!

5.  
   Patricia (Roswila)
   2008-03-13 14:14:06
    

   Very nice! Thanks.

6.  
   Philip McDonnell
   2008-03-13 15:15:40
    

   With the current weather here in Blighty, the green is about all that's forgiving the rain...and the wind...and the grey...and...I'll stop there. :)

7.  
   David Fox
   2008-03-13 17:48:28
    

   Lynne,
   I loved this haiku! Eloquent, simple wording -- yet so profound in its meaning! Well said!
   ~David Fox

8.  
   terrytip
   2008-03-13 18:13:11
    

   spurting up
   above the puddles
   spring flowers
   
   terrytip

9.  
   Bill Kenney
   2008-03-13 19:37:37
    

   Beautifully turned, Lynne.

10.  
    zoe crosse
    2008-03-14 00:41:53
     

    a resolute affirmation of the sublime
    
    executed with grounding precision,
    
    the words have wieght.

11.  
    Maureen Witt
    2008-03-14 01:16:57
     

    Rain puddles, Nature's
    mirrors,reflections rippled
    by bathing birds wings.

12.  
    Penelope
    2008-03-14 03:36:19
     

    "...like tears in the rain."
    
    
    Quite the quite, Lynne.

13.  
    Reason A.
    2008-03-14 03:53:57
     

    Or in another venue common to some:
    
    all this green
    forgiving the rain
    mud on the track

14.  
    Melissa Spurr
    2008-03-14 09:32:33
     

    Such a novel way to see the rain. Very nice!
    
    rain puddle
    sunshine drys up
    reflections

15.  
    judith ingram (super dot ingram at verizon dot net)
    2008-03-15 14:13:54
     

    "All this green forgiving the rain."
    
    succinct and so eloquent. I'll remember you forever for this gift!
    
    I loved Philip McDonnell's reply. We've all been there.

16.  
    Frances Ruth Harris
    2008-03-16 01:44:03
     

    Thank you. What is important and moving you've
    so simply and beautifully executed!
    It brings my mind to times I have spent with
    the green and wet and spony mosses as they
    begin to appear when two environments meet.

17.  
    laryalee
    2008-03-16 11:38:13
     

    Hi Lynne,
    this is simply beautiful!
    And beautifully simple --
    yet complex.
    Good to see you here!
    ;)
    Lary

18.  
    b. m. richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2008-03-17 18:06:29
     

    once more spring all at once...
    winter succumbs again