hospital entrance
rain trickles down
the ivy

—Laryalee Fraser
        

About the author: Lary is a retired reporter/photographer, enjoying small-town life in British Columbia, Canada. Her website is "a leaf rustles".

Responses to the haiku for 1 December 2004 by Laryalee Fraser

  1.  
    john tiong chunghoo
    2004-12-01 05:10:29
     

    hospital reception
    tearful son and
    joyful husband

  2.  
    Kate (chrismomxyz at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-01 11:04:09
     

    whiff of
    disinfectant-
    a memory of Christmas

  3.  
    bob richardson (orgbob at webtv dot net)
    2004-12-01 19:18:17
     

    wails of my neighbor's dog -
    hospital lights
    after midnight

  4.  
    Aurora Antonovic (aurora_antonovic at yahoo dot com)
    2004-12-01 19:48:49
     

    midnight
    through the hospital exit
    things I should have said

  5.  
    martin
    2004-12-02 19:48:29
     

    You don't need my attempts on your pictures...
    This is excellent!

  6.  
    b.m.r.
    2009-02-10 17:34:50
     

    wavering parted curtains
    darkness
    fails to enter

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